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[MrGreen]

Hello, I am new to marketing. I have a blog it's Success Life
I think I am doing something wrong here. Can someone give an advice on perfection of my blog. I am trying to get the information out there, share my experiences and help people out. With that I have set up a Adsense account for some $. Can you review my blog and tell me what I need to improve on?
Thank you for help

[ETRdahir]

How often do you update your content?

[YoungMoney]

i think the formats too plain. + the name "success life" isnt very good. add some more colors to help teh formatting. right now, all i see is text and ads so i think its going to be just a blog to get ad revenue and articles that dont mean anything. i cant tell what the subject is, really... maybe ad some pictures that relate to the articles too. ppl like pictures.

[MrGreen]

Originally Posted by ETRdahir

How often do you update your content?

I am trying to add something new everyday

[MrGreen]

Originally Posted by YoungMoney

i think the formats too plain. + the name "success life" isnt very good. add some more colors to help teh formatting. right now, all i see is text and ads so i think its going to be just a blog to get ad revenue and articles that dont mean anything. i cant tell what the subject is, really... maybe ad some pictures that relate to the articles too. ppl like pictures.

thanks YoungMoney
I'll work on colors and picture. Can you suggest a name?

[ETRdahir]

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[MrGreen]

Originally Posted by ETRdahir

Also if you'd like some goal setting articles check out A free newsletter offering self help tips on making money online, goal setting and success secrets you can use our RSS feeds as long as you provide a link back.

thank you very much. I have made changes and right now my blog looks completely different.

[GregK]

I like the colors. I didn't see the original ones, but these are good. AdSense is a good way to start off. My input would be to start adding images to your blog entries. Find one good one on the internet and include it at the top of the blog post. If you can't find anything good on google, try Bing

[YoungMoney]

Originally Posted by MrGreen

thanks YoungMoney
I'll work on colors and picture. Can you suggest a name?

well i think u need to figure that out yourself. just try to better express what your goal is. maybe even have a tag line if necessary or give it a personality. success life just sounds like u have bad grammar

[YoungMoney]

btw i think it looks a lil better but its still hard to read. you cant really beat black text on a white background. also, try to format your text better so its easier to read - more breaks, appropriately so its not as intimidating. whatever u do try to make ur site more unique looking so ppl dont think its just fake articles on a template